I really like the fact that you’re thinking about these pages. I love to hear that readers are trying to figure out motives and why characters are doing particular things – and how this will effect the story arc. It means we are creating a world that people are getting immersed into *myself included* – and there’s no better compliment than that.

mrcrazy_monkey: Thanks. Yeah, I really like the LS symbol in the background as well. I feel it ties the mood of the page together, and like Spess said, creates an intentional darker tone to the scene.

Rich: Man, thanks so much. It really means a lot. I’ve always looked up to you as a writer & film maker, and have now realize, just how challenging it is to create a good story. I think in the end, we’re trying to develop something we would like to read – and put together a story and characters that we would be interested in following week after week – (and thankfully, others have enjoyed reading as well.) Haha…I think we are getting a head of our selves with this crazy thing ever seeing screen-time – but you’ll be the first one I call if such things take place. I am looking at animation down the road – have a few fun ideas in the works – it would be great to collaborate again on future projects. c-

-RICH

… HAHAHA. I like the way you think.

Karen, great suggestions, I’m on board with anything that ends with the lines “opening a huge can of whoop-ace.”

Thanks, Sam – I’m psyched you liked the page, and was also feeling the vibe…Always happy to assist with an exploding mind.

TenorPenny, thanks so much for the awesome feedback. Like I’ve said before to all our readers *present company* – it’s comments like these that really makes me want to continue with this comic. I can’t tell you all enough, how much your support has meant to me over these past few years – We will do our best to continue the work, to expand this world. As long as we have readers..there will be a comic.

Spess, I’m so amped to hear you got it. The contrast between the ideals and opinions of Bry and Kira, reflected through tone – and mood. Also the dark overtone that the band took on for the page, seems to be well received. I also like the way the two halves the hedge clippers in the brand, almost appear to be connecting them in a way. And for the first time it appears Dan has a little more confidence in himself, a major contrast to the dejected, hung head demeanor of the previous page. Yeah, your interpretation would be correct. It was the effect I was kind of going for…however sometimes what you see in your head doesn’t always work as well on paper…errr screen. As long as the general separation is conveyed,(ie. pulling from one mind set to another.) I’m happy with that.

Raron: major win! Now all Dan has to find is the Mk assault nail guns on 4th level of foundry building – then he’ll truly have the *solid gear* needed.

Thanks again for all the great feedback guys – see you all next Thursday. c-

The brand watermark in the center of the page is a pretty nice touch – everything revolves around it, and it looms over the scene. Have I said already that it’s a pretty murky logo to begin with? This here puts an even darker shade to it.

One thing that immediately sprung into my eye is the kind of… viscous? effect as he’s pulled into the door. Sure, I could interpret that as a transition from the edges of the floor setting into the fluidity of the room setting, but… hmmn. It just looks strange to me.

…’scuse my rambling